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You’re P.O.V

I finally reached the cabin were I met 'him' and he was siting patiently on a dusty old couch, “I’m sorry…” I said rubbing the back of my head nervously. “It’s okay… I actually didn’t expect you to come back…” he said getting up and making his way towards me. I blushed as her brushed a strand of hair out of my face, there was a moment of slice until he began to speak again. “I’ve been thinking a lot about you lately.” He said standing back up straight, “You have?” I asked blushing even more. “Yes… Every time I’m around you I get these weird felling’s… so I have to ask you this…” he said holding both of my hands, “W-what?” I urged. “Are you a witch?” he said tilting his head to the side. ‘WTF! I THOUGHT HE WAS GONNA ASK ME OUT!’ I screamed in my head, I pulled my hands away and face palmed groaning in announce, “No I’m not a witch I’m a regular girl.” He stood back up and rubbed his head. ‘Ugh men…even if he is a monster…’

Slendy’s P.O.V

‘Wait… so she isn’t a witch? Hmm I really need to read more up on mortal analogy…and why I always feel this way around this… HUMAN?’ I thought as I rubbed my chin in deep thought. I felt a tug at my tentacles and looked down to see [name] looking back up at me smiling, “hey let’s play a game…” she said winking at me. I could feel my face heating up, ‘Was I running a fever? No it’s my cheeks… ah I know what this is; humans do it all the time it’s known as blush… I never blushed before… hmm’ I cut my thoughts short and nodded at the cute creature in front of me. “Let’s play hide and seek! You count first!” She said running out the cabin deeper into the woods. I scoffed as I followed her deeper into the woods without her knowing, ‘Hmmph! Might as well enjoy myself…no harm in that.’

You’re P.O.V

I ran far enough any longer and I would get lost I sat down on the grass panting and regaining my breath, I closed my eyes letting the breeze flow through my [hair color/length]. I was drifting off until I heard something’s foots steps “Slenderman?” I said opening my eyes to a humanoid figure with long claw like fingers,’ I knew what this thing was it known as the rake story has it was hunting people down in the north what is it doing down here?!?’  I said getting up and backing away from the creature. Its head twitched then ran straight towards me I covered my face preparing for the worse until I heard a loud thud and a whipping sound. “Slenderman?” I said looking up at the tall man.

Slendy’s P.O.V

“Back away from the girl rake!” I growled, he got up rubbing the side of his face. “What the hell man! It’s just a mortal!!” he shouted back at me growling. “She is under my protection… NOW LEAVE US!” I shouted, he whimpered and ran off into the forest. I turned back to [name] he was smiling at me “Dear girl are you ok? I hope you’re not hurt!” I said examining her body. “I’m fine” she said kissing me on my cheek, “Thank you Slendy” she said giggling. “No problem…” I said blushing.

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hannah12987 Featured By Owner Sep 19, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
WARNING! Carry on reading! Or you will die, even if you only looked at the word warning! Once there was a little girl called Clarissa, she was ten-years-old and she lived in a mental hospital, because she killed her mom and her dad. She got so bad she went to kill all the staff in the hospital so the More-government decided that best idea was to get rid of her so they set up a special room to kill her, as humane as possible but it went wrong the machine they were using went wrong. And she sat there in agony for hours until she died. Now every week on the day of her death she returns to the person that reads this letter, on a Monday night at 12:00 a.m. She creeps into your room and kills you slowly, by cutting you and watching you bleed to death. Now send this to ten other pictures on this one site, and she will haunt someone else who doesn't. This isn't fake. apparently, if you copy and paste this to ten comments in the next ten minutes you will have the best day of your life tomorrow.You will either get kissed or asked out, if you break this chain u will see a little dead girl in you
lobospade Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2014  Student Artist
That WHOLE  first part made me laugh!!!!
The-Black-Soldier Featured By Owner May 21, 2014  Student General Artist
Girl: Do u even want to be with me forever?
Boy: No
Girl: Do u even like me?
Boy: No
Girl: Would u cry if i walked away?
Boy: No
She heard enough and was hurt... She walked away with tears in her eyes
The boy grabbed her arm
Boy: Your not pretty...your beautiful, I dont want to be with u forever...I need to be with u forever, I dont like u...I love u, I wouldn't cry if u walked away......I would die if u walked away
.Boy Whispers: Plz stay with me
Girl: I will…
*Tonight at midnight your true love will realize they loves u
*Something good will happen to u at 1-4pm
*Tomorrow it could be anywhere!!!
*Get ready for the shock of your life!
*If u dont post this to 5 other comments... You will have baD luck in relationships for the next 10 years really dont want to do this but im in a great relationship right now
kolesik123 Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2014
This is too cute
foxcovert Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2014  Student Artist
O.O How did he know I'm a witch?
morietur666 Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2014
"are you a witch?"
what?? pfft~
how did you know that... `-` are you a stalker?? =_=
foxcovert Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2014  Student Artist
Yeah... He is a stalker. remember?
dbzlover880 Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2014
ya kick the rakes ass
SkyBlue008 Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2014
Your not you're. You're - you are.
aylapie Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
woah! slendy! but if you look closley it says he was smileing at me... so im a guy now eh? XD
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